Anone
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TL;DR - The Author is over decriptive and leaves you hanging at key points for no gods damned reason.
I've read until chapter C.379 so far, and frankly I'm losing my patience for this author. His story is well crafted, but his chapters are short, and are main just long, extended descriptions of things. For like 100 chapters the Author set up this first meeting between the MC and his childhood oprressors, and then when he gets to it, he takes 20 chapters to go through maybe the first 10 minutes of the meeting, taking his time describing everything... then suddenly at the end of the chapter, just as the people who were his bullies are called to centerstage, the Author ends the chapter and the next chapter moves time forward by a week! No pay off for the tension he built, no long detailed descriptions of how he was going to let the MC get his revenge. Nope, their names are called, then Chapter ends and in the 14 chapters since then he hasn't even mentioned the MC AT ALL!! 14 chapters that mainly focus on introducing all new charaters we've never met before, meanwhile everyone is left hanging as what happened with this "super important" meet up that had been being set up for half the fuc**** story, that was skipped over, literally, with a time jump of a week! The middle of an arc's climax, and he just skips it! Fu** you Author, just fu** you!
I've read until chapter C.379 so far, and frankly I'm losing my patience for this author. His story is well crafted, but his chapters are short, and are main just long, extended descriptions of things. For like 100 chapters the Author set up this first meeting between the MC and his childhood oprressors, and then when he gets to it, he takes 20 chapters to go through maybe the first 10 minutes of the meeting, taking his time describing everything... then suddenly at the end of the chapter, just as the people who were his bullies are called to centerstage, the Author ends the chapter and the next chapter moves time forward by a week! No pay off for the tension he built, no long detailed descriptions of how he was going to let the MC get his revenge. Nope, their names are called, then Chapter ends and in the 14 chapters since then he hasn't even mentioned the MC AT ALL!! 14 chapters that mainly focus on introducing all new charaters we've never met before, meanwhile everyone is left hanging as what happened with this "super important" meet up that had been being set up for half the fuc**** story, that was skipped over, literally, with a time jump of a week! The middle of an arc's climax, and he just skips it! Fu** you Author, just fu** you!
Sucks big time
I read this from c. 1 to about c. 867 and I just can't do it anymore.
TLDR: It has stagnated, grown tiresome and has out lived anything resembling a coherent story anymore. It probably should have ended 500 or 600 chapters ago.
To give you a preview:
Starts with a system, that is infrequently used and later implodes and disappears.
No less than 2 complete Timeline rewrites
Constantly, the instant that the MC becomes the top dog, nope just big fish in a small pond.
Slowly but surely the MC's "kids" (None of whom he actually is the father of but he either adopts or recycles previously existing beings into being born by his wives, with all their ancient memories) become more and more the focus
MC has yet to actually even face a true Antagonist in the entire series, all of his "primary" foes get taken care of by others or are simply made irrelivent by the MC becoming incredibly OP. The only time the MC actually fights are with secondary, disposable characters.
Oh, and worst of all, the power scaling is inconsistent. In one chater the MC will be on par with Primordial Gods, the next those Primordials can kick his a**, and 2 chapters later he can easily kick their as***. It has just gone on WAY too long.
TLDR: It has stagnated, grown tiresome and has out lived anything resembling a coherent story anymore. It probably should have ended 500 or 600 chapters ago.
To give you a preview:
Starts with a system, that is infrequently used and later implodes and disappears.
No less than 2 complete Timeline rewrites
Constantly, the instant that the MC becomes the top dog, nope just big fish in a small pond.
Slowly but surely the MC's "kids" (None of whom he actually is the father of but he either adopts or recycles previously existing beings into being born by his wives, with all their ancient memories) become more and more the focus
MC has yet to actually even face a true Antagonist in the entire series, all of his "primary" foes get taken care of by others or are simply made irrelivent by the MC becoming incredibly OP. The only time the MC actually fights are with secondary, disposable characters.
Oh, and worst of all, the power scaling is inconsistent. In one chater the MC will be on par with Primordial Gods, the next those Primordials can kick his a**, and 2 chapters later he can easily kick their as***. It has just gone on WAY too long.
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