TLN: Hey guys Reigokai here, this one will be long, so if you want to skip it, just scroll down until you see the gray line.
I have come here with a translator note I wasn’t expecting to write but felt the need to. I wasn’t sure if to put it as a comment or a TLN, but since this has to do with translations, I decided this was a proper place to point this out.
Today, I went to the movies to watch Fate/Stay Night Heaven’s feels. I was excited to the extreme at the prospect of having the chance to watch this movie in actual theaters.
But what I got was something I was already expecting —-BAD translations.
I knew I was going to get into that when I went to the movies, since anime movies are still not considered as actual cinema. And the quality of translation would drop to follow suit to that lack of interest.
BUT the translations here were SO BAD I had to write about this.
For example; the part where Illyasviel attacks Saber with Berserker, she shouts an order to Berserker (according to translation of the movie): “Saber has high regenerative powers, so rape her and then cut off her head!” Like WHAT, that’s not what she said!
This is what she said: ‘Saber has high regenerative powers, so cut off her head and destroy her body!” which OBVIOUSLY makes more sense.
But the damage was made. All my friends though this was a rapy movie, and most likely, everyone in the movie was swept into that tone. Meaning that, in what comes ahead of the movie, they will be expecting those kind of dirty themes and begin seeing the movie in a light that isn’t actually there.
I love the Fate/Stay Night series, and as a fan, a translator, and somewhat of a writer, all this clicked me in the wrong way. There were many other translation misses and so many other changes in tone, it butchered my enjoyment and made me seriously think about this issue.
Well, sorry for the long rant guys. I really wanted to point this one out. And if you are going to watch an anime movie, be really careful. Subtitles are not to be trusted in movies. I have more trust in fan translated things than actual movie translations, which is a sad reality.
But more than that, what worried me more was the behaviour of Karen-san.
What was that cold rejection towards the knights just now?
That is something incredibly unthinkable from the Karen-san I know.
I was so bothered by the unsuitable attitude of Karen-san that I felt I had to keep my dealing with Ates to a reasonable extent and chase after Karen-san.
I slip through the light knight corps’ practice location and head towards the place where Karen-san left to. Inside a forest that is outside from the area of the Light Grand Church, there was an open space that even felt out of place.
This place is the long-distance sniping space that was specially made for the wind hero Hyue.
At the time when Hyue came to visit, this is what was made; a place that no one uses since the time Hyue returned to Rudras Metropolis…is how it should have been, but…..at that place, Karen-san had unsheathed her holy sword and brandished it directly at the sky.
“…[Holy Light Bisection]” (Karen)
A dazzling light was released from the blade, and the light sword slowly become bigger, longer.
It was a completely different technique from the long ‘Holy Light Line’ that is released as a distance attack. Making the holy sword’s blade itself grow bigger with the light divine power is the new ultimate technique of Karen-san; the ‘Holy Light Bisection’.
But…
“Kugh!”
The light blade that had been gigantified became small specs of light and disperse.
When that happens, the big light sword will obviously lose its volume and become smaller.
In reality, the big light sword of Karen-san can only increase by a limit and completely stops growing anymore from that.
“Gunuuuuu!!” (Karen)
But even with that, from what I see in Karen-san’s expression, she is still trying to put in more power in order to make it bigger, but in reality, it isn’t following her wishes.
At Rudras Metropolis, she had sliced the giant slime in two with a single stroke from that technique…but at that time, it wasn’t a technique that Karen-san managed to do alone…
“…Ah, Haine-san.” (Karen)
She must have given up for now.
She dispersed all the light blade that came out from the holy sword and returned to simply being a sword.
“I have shown you an embarrassing sight. ‘Holy Light Bisection’ is still not in a territory that can be called completed.” (Karen)
At the time in Rudras Metropolis, she managed to maintain that giant light blade, but the reason for that was not the achievement of Karen-san only, but because of the cooperation of one other person. That person is Sunnysol Ates who had lent her power to succeed in the making of the ‘Holy Light Bisection’.
“Release and convergence; utilizing these two originally opposing concepts at the same time, moreover, it has to be at the best of its capabilities, or the ‘Holy Light Bisection’ won’t succeed. In Rudras Metropolis, I managed the release, while Ates-sama dealt with the convergence. By dividing the work, we managed to form the giant light sword.” (Karen)
Karen-san says this with a pained expression.
“But that’s not good! I have to learn how to do ‘Holy Light Bisection’ by myself without requiring the help of such a person!” (Karen)
And that’s the reason for today’s training huh.
It is true that Karen-san is blessed with talent, but she definitely isn’t only described with just that. She is always unable to be satisfied with the current state and puts effort in climbing up to the next step.
But today, that looked way too painful.
“There’s no need to blame yourself that much. From what I see, it doesn’t look like a problem that can be resolved in one go, so how about taking your time in progressing?” (Haine)
The reason why I followed-up by saying this was because it was clear to my eyes that Karen-san was hurrying.
It is because she was so in a hurry that she neglected her answers on the knights and ended up giving a cold impression.
Taking out the impatience in her heart is also part of my duty.
But…
“That’s no good!!” (Karen)
Karen-san rejected it a lot more fervently than I thought.
As I thought, she is acting weird. She is losing her usual self.
“I have to…I have to become stronger no matter what! Complete ‘Holy Light Bisection’ and also increase the power of my other abilities! But that’s just not enough at all.” (Karen)
Ah.
“In order to defeat those Demon Lords…” (Karen)
Right.
Karen-san and the others have already met them.
They are the strongest of existences that can’t even be compared to any of the monsters until now.
The Wind Demon Lord Raphael; Earth Demon Lord Uriel; Water Demon Lord Gabriel; Fire Demon Lord Michael; the power of the four Demon Lords surpassed by far what we expected.
A single Demon Lord would probably easily defeat all the heroes, and the proof of that is the fact that, with a single glare, the movements of Karen-san and the others were completely sealed.
“We are heroes! We have to fight those Demon Lords and come out victorious. In order to do that, I have to become more more more more!” (Karen)
So she needs power huh.
It is not only Karen-san. Mirack, Celestis, Sasae-chan, Hyue; all the current heroes have felt the difference in the wall that stands before them and they are apparently all training in their own cities —with the previous heroes as partners.
Mirack and Celestis, who habitually came here to hang out when they found the time, have not shown themselves lately because of that reason.
“I see.” (Haine)
Karen-san acting strange lately wasn’t only because of Ates alone.
In the face of these giant and powerful enemies that are the Demon Lords, it can’t be helped that she would end up stiffening her body.
“…Training by yourself will not be good enough, right?” (Haine)
It would be easy to untie the permeating danger of Ates and maintain the support of the knights, however, what has to be done for Karen-san who is trying to face the threat of the Demon Lords on her own is another completely different thing.
An act of kindness.
If Karen-san is going to valiantly stand to face that threat, I will also stand by the side of Karen-san and advance together with her.
“I will be your training partner.” (Haine)
“Eh? Uhm, but…!” (Karen)
It looks like Karen-san was terribly flustered by these words.
“It is fine. Just think of me as a Demon Lord and attack me with all you have! It might even relief stress. Two birds with one stone, don’t you think?” (Haine)
“T-Then…[Holy Light Blade]!” (Karen)
A light slash is released from Karen-san’s holy sword.
It was one attack, however, I have my invincible dark matter—ah.
“Buaaaaagh~~!!!” (Haine)
“Haine-san?!” (Karen)
Being hit by the light blade, I was send flying.
Right, I completely forgot.
The only weakness of my dark matter; it is completely powerless against light divine power.
“That’s why I asked if it was okay! Haine-san, are you okay?! Haine-san? Haine-saaaaann!!” (Karen) <Snaaaake!>
I am alive, but I was blown faraway by that light divine power.
How pathetic.
To think that I, as the assistant of Karen-san, am not even able to serve as a practice partner for her.
- 222: Home Visit
“Aaah! How pathetic!!”
In the end, after that, I passed my time watching the training of Karen-san from the side.
Even when I have the darkness power that’s supposedly the strongest of all, I can’t even give advice to Karen-san in how to grow that light power of hers.
I also finished my duties for the day and returned.
***
The place I am currently residing at in Apollon City is at the public housing area that is under the direct management of the Light Church.
I was lent one of the rooms and was living alone.
I opened it with my key and enter the room.
When I turn on the ethereal-powered lights, the night became bright like morning.
“…”
It is night, but I am not hungry yet.
Let’s take a bath first and get refreshed.
“Fill up the bathtub and…” (Haine)
Since coming to the big city, I have been surprised by a number of things, but one of those is that when I turn the faucet, warm water comes out on its own.
In the time I was at my village, we would have to go to the well, or do a round trip to the river in order to fill up the bathtub.
Maintained sewers, pumps that one can draw water from in the residential areas, machines that heat up the water; everything has been made possible thanks to ethereal, and they move due to ethereal.
What a splendid civilization.