?So up to this chapter, which one is better between this rewrite and the old novel? And which part do you guys think I still need to improve in this rewrite? Please give me your opinions, ideas, or else.

Rewrite - 155 chapters - 183k words 𝗳𝒓𝙚e𝓌e𝚋𝙣𝚘𝐯𝙚𝙡.𝑐૦ｍ

Old novel - 277 chapters - 295k words

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