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Luo Qingyi pointed out their shortcomings and pointed out their advantages. They made them feel that they were not bad at all. They were very happy to hear them, and remembered the key points of Luo Qingying, ready to go back. Continue to work hard.
"Well, everyone continues to cheer." Luo Qingyi encouraged them. If they don't come up, they will suppress them. Otherwise, these people will soon give up and don't do it. When they don't say three months, they can't train for three years. Su Yi can have a headache.
"The next step is to cherish and tell you about your story." Luo Qingyi finally accepted the task of both of them.
I don't know why, Luo Qingying feels instinct, they will be indifferent, together with the position of the two editors. If this is the case, it is exactly one responsible for the palace, one for the palace, and one living.
"Then I will come first." He stood up.
"Good!" Luo Qingyi applauded her. "At last, someone took the initiative to stand up."
remarkably brave! Luo Qingying praised her.
"After all, the last lesson was also my own. It was simple to write a story. The result was not compiled. I was so proud and proud that I would like to apologize to everyone." I gave everyone a sorry, and then proceeded.
"After these three days of creation, I realized that it is not easy to write a wonderful and beautiful story. It takes a long time to scrutinize, edit, be logical, let the children like it, not just Just telling the story, we want to express the truth of the life we want to pass to the children through the story. It is very difficult to do these things, so the story I wrote this time is not particularly brilliant. Here I want to give everyone Dedicated."
"Good." Su Yi cheered, "I can be brave enough to accept the challenge, this palace admire, everyone applauds!"
"Thank you sisters." He accepted everyone's applause and was a little embarrassed.
"Well, let's get started." Su Yi entered the theme.
"Okay." He took a few deep breaths, then picked up the rice paper that wrote the story and read it.
"One day, a snail and an ant met, and they came under a big mountain at the same time. The ant asked the snail: "Where are you going to go?" The snail replied: "I want to climb the top of the highest mountain and see The scenery of nature. ”
The ant said: "I advise you not to go, we just got down from there, too tired, too far, and there is nothing to look at." The snail listened and said: "Maybe, but I still want to go up." Look."
The ant said again: "Snail brother, you still don't want to go, there is really nothing to look at, like you climb so slowly, it is estimated that you can't reach the top of the mountain in a year."
The snail smiled and said, "Thank you, ant brother, I know your kindness, but I still want to see it. Although I climb slowly, I can climb slowly."
The ants repeatedly dissuaded: "Do you know that it is going to be winter now? If you climb to the mountains, you will be overwhelmed by heavy snow. Brother, why not come back next year?" The snail still insisted on doing the current thing.
When the ants saw that they were ineffective, they had to shake their heads and walked in groups. The snail crawled slowly on the back of the shell. It crawled very slowly, but it was also very stable. After unremitting efforts, the last snail finally climbed to the highest mountaintop before the snowfall, and saw the snowy scenery underneath.
When it set foot on the way home, many insect partners came to ask how it did it. The snail replied:
"Nothing, I just want to accomplish one thing, so I did it."
When I finished the story, Luo Qingyi listened and nodded with satisfaction.
"Not bad..."
"Yeah, it's quite interesting."
"Snails crawl slowly, ants climb fast, like turtles and bunny. In the end, the people who persisted in the end triumphed, and the half-way people failed."
"Yeah, yeah, that's great."
Everyone, if you say a word to me, you can praise it. After all, this is the first time that you can create such a level. It is quite good.
"This palace also thinks it can be, how does Chu Wangyi look?" Su Yi also nodded and praised, could not help but look at each other.
“It’s really good. The story is a complete reflection of the emotions you want to express, and it can also make your child’s clear consciousness as long as they persist, they will be able to achieve their goals!”
For the first time, Luo Qingyi praised a person in an open place. This is the first time that Luo Qingyi’s award has been won.
"Thank you for the praise of Chu Wangxi!"
"Hmm, oh, you can, have talent, and then practice for a while, you can be the editor." Luo Qingyi is optimistic about her. There are logics in making a story. Although it is a short story, the basic elements are all there. It seems to be using the heart.
"Good! The courtiers must practice well and will not disappoint the cultivation of the queen and the king of Chu." He was very happy, and the three-day effort was not in vain.
I was recognized by Luo Qingyi and Su Yi, and I was more happy than anything.
"Then, should we read what Jane has written?"
"Yeah, why Jane has never talked, shouldn't it be written?"
"A few days ago, I was still stunned. Now I am silent and I dare not speak."
"Hey, don't say that, I think the treasures are all in the house in the past few days. The hoes in the courtyard all say that they are burying their heads. You don't want to look down on people. Maybe you can write better than you." Only for the first time, there is no confidence."
"Yeah, yeah, I seem to have seen it too."
Everyone is talking about the precious hand, but she is a bit nervous.
"Zhen, what do you say? Is the story written?" Luo Qingyi asked directly.
A few days ago, she did see that Jane was a bit targeted, and it was estimated that everyone was the first time. She also wanted to express herself. Luo Qingying saw that the strength of Zhenli should be above of.
But the scorpion is a horse, or you have to pull it out.
"Yeah, Jane, you have been not talking, making the palace a little nervous, whether you wrote it or not, we all wait to hear it." Queen Su Yi also hung in the heart eye.
"I..." Zhen Zhen is really a bit nervous. "I wrote, but I have no confidence. This is the first time I have learned to write a story. I want to write it, but I have no experience, just follow that. The stories in the twenty painted books have extracted a few key points, and one of them is written in a gourd."
"Oh, that's fine. I also wrote the story of ants and snails in the version of the tortoise and the hare. We all want to see the story you wrote. Let's just read it for everyone. I can't wait." "Queen Suyi gave her a show."
"Everyone also cheered on Zhen Zhen." She took the lead and applauded.
"Zhen Zhenjiao! We are optimistic
You! Write it together as the editor, we are all driven by you and you. ”
"Yeah, come on."
Everyone encouraged, Luo Qingying also cheered her up.
"It doesn't matter, what kind of writing, everyone will not laugh at you, as long as a lot of contact is good, I did not ask you to form one time, whoever has the first time, as long as they dare to accept the challenge, the other is not a problem. ”
Luo Qingyi can say that is the same. In fact, it is the first time to write it. She is not very demanding. She only hopes that they can work hard for this matter and treat the story as an important matter. ,
Is it perfunctory, as long as you hear the story, you will know.
"Okay, then I will give everyone a thought."
"Well!" everyone applauded.
"In the past, there were two wolves. They were quietly moving in the woods at night. One day, they caught a sheep who was drinking water by the river. Both wolves wanted to swallow the sheep, so they quarreled.
At this time, the sheep thought about it and said, "You must kill and kill, don't make noise, and wake up my mother."
The two wolves glanced at the little lamb in front of them and thought of the ewes in the house. They subconsciously rushed into the house to catch the mother. At this moment, the lamb followed, and the door was locked when the two wolves threw themselves into the house.
The two wolves did not find the mother of the sheep at all, and when they saw the closed door, they realized that it was a plan. The lamb shouted at the house: "Two bad wolves, let you bully me, you wait, I will go to the big dog to clean up you."
The two wolves were scared to the ground and said, "I am finished, I am fooled..." Zhen Yan roughly read her story, Luo Qingyi listened, and it was OK.
"It seems to be good, it is simple and easy to understand."
"Yeah, it's ok to write, although there is no such thing as a wonderful story, but it is also a complete story."
"It seems that both of them can play the main role of the editor at the same time."
After listening to the Queen, I found that Jane’s ability to compose a story is not bad: “It’s really good to talk about it. Don’t worry if you encounter something, rush to be wise, and save your life at a critical moment.”
"Yeah, it's a very interesting story, it's awesome! We support you."
Everyone supports Yi and Zhen Zhen. Now it seems that the succession of the two editors is a matter of nailing. After all, the two of them have learned at least the story, but they can't write a word.
"Zhen, you are very talented. Why are you not confident? The treasures I have known a few days ago are not so indecisive. The treasures I know should be more gutmic than now, and I can accept more challenges. ""
Luo Qingyi does not think that there is any problem with the rare story, but she is not confident that it may be mainly because she was trained by Luo Qingying a few days ago.
"Well, Chen has studied for three days and found that the simpler the surface looks, the more difficult it is. According to our thinking, in fact, the child's ability to accept is limited. I have written several stories, all of which are better than this. Long, but then I thought about it. If it is too long, the child may not see it. They need simple things. It is best to tell them what we want to express at a glance.
I also wrote this story to myself, mainly because I was too proud a few days ago and offended Wang Hao. The courtiers here apologize to the sisters and Wang Hao! ”