MTL - Internet 2010-~ Sand sculpture testimonials

Hello everyone, my name is Zhennan.

This chapter is just a casual chat, it's a testimonial.

First of all, I would like to thank all readers for taking the time to read this book.

I believe that readers who can read this chapter should be true love. After all, if I really want to talk about it, I still feel that I am a little self-willed to write things up until now.

Here I give an example of what is willfulness.

The latest volume, "Silver", has written almost 200,000 words. Readers who read carefully should not find it difficult to find that the subject and perspective of the narrative are constantly switching. If I read this novel by myself and ignore the fact that I am the author (although not very capable), I will definitely call the author a "sand sculpture" when I see it. When no one imagines that he is the protagonist, reading and substituting himself into it, this novel is only enjoyable to read. And the problem is not only obvious in "Silver", but the previous chapters also contain more or less non-protagonist perspectives. This is also doomed that the experience of this novel is not so good when reading it.

This question needs to be viewed from several angles. This volume on the main line tells the development of Luzhou IM after the channel is stabilized, and it is mixed with a lot of details. For example, about online gambling, online lending, ridiculing piracy, talking about unfamiliar social interaction and sex, micro-business, self-media, data privacy, dark web, bitcoin, data labeling, rumors, etc. Although it seems that the amount of information is quite large, in actual writing, there are many unclear words. Some are clues, while others cannot be written, not easy to write, and should not be written indiscriminately. Then again, it is doomed that many stories need to be shown from the perspective of supporting roles. First, it is reasonable and reasonable, and second, we can talk more generously and realistically.

Why do you need to write these bits and pieces? Two points, logic and storytelling.

As mentioned earlier, the main line is about the development of Luzhou IM after the channel is stabilized. It should be inevitable that it will be an app store and someone will make chess and card games and gambling games. It should also be used by people to yp when Mochao is popular...

Many things seem to be deliberately arranged, but in fact these stories have become a logical foothold for the success of the protagonist's product. At least it sounds like the same thing. And many stories often lead to questions. Most of them are the problems that Luzhou Company may encounter in the development of my imagination. We'll talk about this later. As for. Oops, does a lot of money from Luzhou Banana come from chess and card games? I won't explain more about that.

The second story. It's not easy to juggle fun and logic. As far as my own writing experience is concerned, it is probably that in order to write clearly and develop, it is necessary to give up a certain story. It can be understood that the logic is very transparent, but it has become a description or dialogue throughout the text to advance the main line. Looking ahead, this is probably the case in the previous chapters of this book. It's not so interesting to write like that. As for the look and feel, it depends on personal preference.

So, here to answer the question just mentioned: why do you need to write these bits and pieces. Jargon: water. Make the story interesting while keeping the logic correct.

It's up to you whether you like it or not. After all, it sacrificed a lot of substitution.

Let’s talk about some of the questions raised in the story.

Many of them are controversial topics that are very close to reality. If we want to summarize them in general terms, it is probably "the contradiction between people and technology in certain scenarios." Not to brag about the idea of ​​the work. I think it's just part of a microcosm of society in real development, and I'm just trying to articulate it. Although, many chapters are not necessarily written.

What does "Silver" mean?

Before answering this question, I thought of a question that some readers have mentioned: Wen Qing.

After thinking about it for a while, I kind of understood what this adjective meant to me. Of course, although I caught some signs, I still feel a little mysterious. The reason for getting a similar answer is that I saw a summary of the squid when reading the Lord of Best Friends.

[I am more and more pursuing simplicity and piercing, that is to say, if I can accurately describe with the simplest and simplest words, I try not to talk about long stories, and I don’t need to fill in with gorgeous things. I rely on the calmest and most objective line drawing to accumulate emotions step by step. At the most appropriate time, use the most precise and concise language to pierce the barrier and pierce the softest part of the heart...]

On the other hand, what about myself?

First let me answer it myself. The concept of [Silver] comes from Wang Xiaobo's "Silver Age". In this book, the concept of silver is repeatedly used to describe the utopian world. It itself is a relatively open-ended fable and metaphor.

In the book, the beginning of this symbolic concept is first in a plot where Lu Zhou was invited by Rebs to the capital to attend a meeting, discussing issues of privacy and user rights. This was followed by a series of problems in the banana market, and then followed by the "Silver" volume.

In other words, ~www.novelbuddy.com~ borrows the concept of silver. In actual writing, I hope to describe a social situation similar to dystopia in reality, and Luzhou itself is in it, and is the creator of a certain system. (An encyclopedia explains dystopia: material is higher than spirit, spirit is dependent on and controlled by material, and the spiritual world is not free when technology is highly developed.)

Let's talk about the Silver Scroll, there is a separate chapter "Connor", what does Connor mean? ! Speaking of which, I'm **** off myself. The first half of this chapter is about some measures that Luzhou will take during the Spring Festival, involving some user privacy issues. The second half describes some of Zhong Yuanliang's views on privacy. Why is it called Connor? ! The name comes from the "Terminator" series of human resistance leader - John Connor. At the time I was going to use this as a metaphor for future clues.

There are many chapters like this. For example, some reverie around AI, such as discussing the plot of interaction with Zhang Xiaolong.

When you understand what you have written before, the answer to the question is obvious: the key story details and background are not described enough, so that the reader does not understand what the story is about; too many metaphors and metaphors are used in the details, and it becomes difficult to understand and It doesn't make much sense.

So, emm... the testimonials are over.

I write well, you take your time to read. If you like the collection, subscribe and vote for a wave, and if you are poisoned, tear it up in the comment area.

Seems like I forgot something. Oh, the love scene. emm... It doesn't matter if it's rotten, or the water is good, it's as much as it should be.

So be it. See you.

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