MTL - Fantasy System-Chapter 453 The "Magic College Love Guide" that was put on the discussion

Seeing that Xia Zhiqiu Shi Yu actually shed tears, Yingli pear immediately regretted, and hurriedly waved his hand, saying something incoherently: "You... don't cry, I just said that the book is dying for the first time, we can be slow Slowly modify the story to the next volume and work hard again....."

"Efforts are useless because I can't find a way for the reader to write."

Xia Zhiqiu Shi Yu looked up at Yingli Pear, and his tone was low: "This light novel, I clearly wrote everything in the normal way, obviously no mistakes, but sales have proved that everything is The reader denied that this kind of thing is not as easy as you think....."

Speaking of this, the tears of Xia Zhiqiu Yu Yu had wet the table in front of her. She picked up the bag on the table and left her head and left the coffee shop.

Looking at the Xia Zhiqiu Yu Yu who left, Mu Fan and Ying Li Pear were in silence, sitting in the seat, no one spoke.

At this time, Xia Zhiqiu Yu Yu was unable to listen to anyone's persuasion, this time still let her quiet better.

Just before the Xia Zhiqiu Yu Yu and Mu Fan and Ying Li pear three meals were picked up by the maid, but after Xia Zhiqiu Shi Yu such a trouble, even if the original hungry pear pear has no appetite, just drink a few mouthfuls of ice Water, looking at Mufan’s self-blame, said: “Mu Fan, I just did it a little too much....”

Mufan shook his head and squeezed a smile on his face. He comforted: "School is not such a stingy person. This thing does not blame you. Of course, it does not blame the sister, but the problem lies in the results of the book. The sister of the school is different from the silver flashing person who is beyond her author. Your silver glittering adult belongs to a book. The accumulation of a book and the growth of his own weaknesses to make up for the gods, he can withstand the blow, can be hit Hone the extraordinary person."

"In theory, a **** who has written into millions of sales books is more determined than a person who is a **** of a book, no matter the heart, or the understanding of light novels. When she published the book, she passed the name of Xia Shizi. It was a book that became famous. But because of the fame of a book, the pressure on the new book is even greater, and the heart is not determined. I still don’t understand the new book. What kind of form is presented to everyone, and what to do if the second book is on the street."

"I can easily come up with new themes, and sorted out the mistakes of the book, presented to everyone's favorite things, and finally exchanged a reader does not understand, the book review area comments are not bad, but after the book is published, As a result of the unsuccessful purchase of sales, the sales of her efforts were denied by the readers, and her heart was more uncomfortable than the direct street."

Mufan knows that Yingli pear is a good girl, and although she often biceps with Xia Zhiqiu, it is because of the quarrel that the relationship between the two people is very good. Xia Zhiqiu is not a stingy person, like Yingli pear. It may be angry because of the other words.

Therefore, in the eyes of Mu Fan, what really makes the school sister care is always the problem of her new book.

In the final analysis, Xia Zhiqiu Yu Yu is too concerned about the reader's views and new books.

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I heard that Mufan said that there was no surprise expression on the face of Yingli Pear. Instead, he disappointed: "I saw this kind of Xia Shizi for the first time. I hope she can get up early."

"Do not worry, the school sister is not the kind of self-destructive person, let's eat first."

Mu Fan smiled and gestured to Yingli pear to eat. After all, Yingli pear came to the coffee shop to prove that she was hungry. Looking back at the brigade that had lined up to buy the game before, Mufan understood that Yingli pear might not have eaten breakfast.

The school sister is sad and does not eat or drink, but can not always bring the British pear.

Of course, although Mufan soothes Yingli pears, Mufan can understand that Xia Zhiqiu’s heart has always been much stronger than others, but this time the school sister is really sad, and it’s the kind of heart that died. I am afraid that it will not pass easily.

Can Mufan forget a little, even he knows that Xia Zhiqiu Yu Yu will not recover as simple as this. How can Ying Li pear, who has been dealing with Xia Zhiqiu Yu, not understand the character of Xia Zhiqiu?

In the coffee shop, the two people are not in a good mood. They just ate a little bit and left most of the food to check out. Because Mufan and Yingli pear’s family are on the way, Mu Fan proposed to temporarily help Yingli Pear. Going home with the game equipment.

Halfway, Yingli Pear’s mobile phone suddenly rang.

Yingli pear took out the phone and looked at it, then quickly replied a few words on the screen and took back the phone.

"What's matter?"

There was nothing in the way back from Akihabara. Mufan couldn’t help but feel awkward. It happened that Yingli pear took out his mobile phone, so he took the lead to find a topic to ask Yingli pear.

Yingli pear put the phone back in the pocket of his clothes and whispered: "It is not an important thing. After half a month, the comic festival held in Japan hopes that all the famous cartoonists in the industry can create a short comic. At the comics festival, the first place will receive the trophy from the comics industry. Although I have been painting the book, I can communicate with each other in the comics industry. Therefore, the person in charge of the comics industry always hopes that I can attend, but The comic festival needs original short comics. You also know that I don't understand the original plot. I plan to familiarize myself with the original plot and then participate. I don't worry."

"This way."

Mu Fan nodded, and Ying Li pear as a fellow painter has always been unfamiliar with the original plot, even if "Father Loves Mountain" is also seeking his help, it is also a good thing to be able to understand his own shortcomings and find a way to make up.

But the school sister is not the same...

Because of the coffee shop, Mu Fan’s heart has been thinking about Xia Zhiqiu’s poetry. On the first night, she went to sleep after reading the code. On the second day, she logged into the official website of the electric shock library and looked at the magic of Xia Zhiqiu’s poetry. The online version of the College Love Guide, he was shocked to find that Xia Zhiqiu Yu was not updated last night.

From "Love Metronome" to "Magic College Love Guide", Xia Shizi broke for the first time.

Seeing some doubts in the book review area, the authors broke the information. Of course, many people did not care about it. The authors also needed a holiday break. They would not care if they took a break.

Mu Fan also felt that the school sister was in a bad mood yesterday and broke off another day.

Should I update it the next day?

But the next day, when Mu Fan opened the electric shock library and clicked on the "Magic College Love Guide", he found that the school sister did not update.

Waiting for another day, the third day, the school sister finally updated, but Mu Fan opened and saw the story inside but stunned.

The inside of the school sister is like a big blow. In the new chapter, there are typos in it, and the plot is even more heart-wrenching. Even the female owner has left because of the distrust of the male leader, and the male owner is drunk. On the low-end bureau story of the women's third.

You must know that Mu Fan has seen the "Love Guide of the Magic Academy". Even if the female character created by Xia Zhiqiu Yu Yu joined the white school, the performance is also smart and wise. The low-end intelligence problem of the female host is impossible to commit. The man is not stupid, how can I go to the third woman?

However, it is indeed the writing of such a heart-warming plot, which has attracted countless readers, and the book review area is almost silent.

There are also several authors who are not familiar with him and Xia Zhiqiu Shi Yu in the author group, who are the authors of the great gods. They are also taking the opportunity to eliminate the goddess of Xia Zhiqiu, and deliberately invited the Shuijun to brush the comments.

Online comments are most afraid of people taking the lead. Once you take the lead, someone will follow you. Because of the appearance of the water army, the snoring of the book review area can’t be controlled. There are hundreds of them.

Because the things of Xia Zhiqiu Yuyu became more and more troublesome, in the end, Mufan inadvertently saw some comments from the C station. After opening, he found that the latest chapter of the book was even taken by the CP station and other website's uP masters. Comment, titled "The Lightest Novel of the Most Mentally Handicapped Female in History", "The Magical College Love Guide Once Again Refreshes the IQ Limit" "The Most Lookable Faceless Light Novel in History"

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In short, a series of titles emerge in an endless stream, and the school sister is also known as the most intellectually savvy author of the shocking library in one day. Even the author claims that Xia Shizi is so free to write a light novel, and is not worthy of signing the Great God.

"School sisters don't deserve, you are the author of others who are arrogant, and instead of discussing others, it is better to use those time to develop yourself."

After the authors recovered their authors, Mu Fan then shut the computer annoyed.

As soon as I thought of the school sister who was crying that day, he was lying in bed exhausted and looked at Baisensen’s ceiling and sighed. This world is the hottest era of ACg culture.

It is precisely because it is too hot, such a well-known writer of the electric shock library such as Xia Shizi, once even wrote the "Love Metronome" that made an anime. Once the intellectual disability is written, it will be instantly read by the readers and the up-and-comers. The authors pushed the hot reviews.

In this era, cyber violence exists and is more terrible than their time. I don’t know if the school sister can withstand this blow.

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Time passed by, and on the fourth day, Mu Fan opened the online version of the "Magic College Love Guide."

Not only Mufan, but at the same time many readers and online ups and authors are ready to take a new chapter or the author's explanation. They found that the "Magic College Love Guide" is no more today.

The fifth day of the "Magic College Love Guide" no more.

The sixth day of "Magic College Love Guide" no more.

In a twinkling of an eye, now, on the seventh day, Mufan looked deeply at the online version of the "Magic Academy Love Guide", and the latest chapter of the book still has no movement....