MTL - All the Cultivators In the Immortal World Think That the Peak Master is Ruthless.-Chapter 363 Final reflection (with spoilers)

  Chapter 363 Ending Reflection (including spoilers)

   It’s finally over, it’s not easy—

  The story of Gu Qingmo and Mo Chuli ends here. Thank you to everyone who persevered. Your support is my motivation.

   In addition, it is impossible to write the extras, don't even think about it, unless there is a forgotten hole, I will still fill it.

There are also many pits about the Yun sisters, not because I forgot to fill in, but I didn't plan to fill in from the beginning. Yun Chen and Yun Mo are the protagonists of my other book, and I decided to put them in after thinking for a long time. in this book.

   As for why I put it in, it was because I found a big bug when I was writing it. In order to fix the loophole in the plot, I thought again and again and decided to put Yunchen in.

   The pits about the Yun sisters will be filled in another book.

   Then there is my reflection on this book. I will read every comment from everyone, especially your suggestions. I think it is very important, and I will delete those malicious comments directly.

As a whole, the plot of this book is very routine. I have traveled to all four countries, and accidents will happen wherever I go (mainly because my brain is not enough), and the writing is also very general (I still know what level I have), in the character creation. Not to mention, I didn't even write the protagonist well, and I started to let go of my character as I wrote it, and I ran away.

Moreover, when I write articles, I always focus on the protagonist, so that my supporting roles are very vague in terms of character design, CP, personality, experience, etc. It was hard work, and some of the supporting characters didn't even have a name at the end.

   Moreover, I only thought about the main line carefully, and did not seriously design the sub-line, which is also a big problem.

In my point of view, the sub-line serves the main line. I reflected on this book while writing and found that the sub-line does not necessarily serve the main line. To a large extent enrich the content of the article.

   In general, in one sentence, this book is a problem everywhere, and there are quite a few things that need to be corrected.

In addition, speaking back to me, being lazy is really lazy, but I will try to keep changing it, that is, less (sickness is an accident); It's not my focus after all.

   I still hope that this sideline can be developed. Although writing novels is a test of perseverance, patience, brains, writing, etc., I am still very happy to write the stories I want, especially when it is over, I will have a great sense of accomplishment.

  Finally I want to say something I've always wanted to say-

  Gu Qingmo is just a ceiling of combat power, not invincible! ! ! Whose ceiling has only one piece! ! !

  Mo Chuli is also not a dazzling, cool and arrogant male protagonist! ! ! He is just a child who wants to be favored by his master! ! !

   What we wrote is not a cool article, please let me go [crying in the toilet jpg.]

  ——Here is the dividing line——

  Some people say that the plot is confusing, let me explain it to you.

  Gu Qingmo is the **** of war in the God Realm, and Mo Chuli is the disciple she picked up.

  The two were with each other day and night. Mo Chuli fell in love with his master, but he didn't dare to say that he had formed a demon over time, and was finally taken advantage of it and caused a catastrophe.

  Gu Qingmo couldn't bear to kill his apprentice, so he simply sealed Mo Chuli and the God Realm together, breaking his soul into thousands of pieces.

   Then Gu Qingmo began a thousand-year reincarnation cycle. It was Yun Chen who helped her reincarnate. In the last life, Yun Chen handed over to Xiaoyao Sanren.

   Later, when Gu Qingmo was growing up, Yun Chen separated Mo Chuli's original soul from the sealed body and put it into the prepared body, which was equivalent to reincarnation, but his body was a clone of the original body.

After   , he sent Mo Chuli to Wanjian Sect and let the two meet.

The    text content starts here.

   The next one——

   [Woman disguised as a man with outstanding martial arts, cold-hearted and ruthless female protagonist × rebirth, white cut, black poisonous tongue, chasing wife, crematorium male protagonist]

   Yan Nuo died on the battlefield, but opened his eyes and returned to the Dingguohou mansion ten years ago.

   She is reborn without obsession, regret, resentment, and nostalgia.

   But it doesn't matter, it's not a big problem.

   It was the arch-enemy, His Royal Highness Xiao Chenyi, who had nothing to do all day looking for trouble. He came to play with her every three days, in the name of enhancing his relationship.

   Yan Nuo: There is a conspiracy!

    …

   Xiao Chenyi has been a lonely man for decades. When the deadline is approaching, he regrets that he didn't show his intentions to Yan Nuo because of all kinds of things.

   As a result, as soon as he closed his eyes and opened them, he returned to the age of sixteen.

   He swore that this time, he would take the person he had missed for decades into his arms.

   Small snippet——

   Heqin Princess: "Yan Nuo, what kind of girl do you like?"

   Fake man Yan Nuo: "...I like martial arts."

   and the pro-princess: "Well, I can learn."

   His Royal Highness, who was eavesdropping next door: This is me.

   Yan Nuo: "I also know how to cook."

   Heqin Princess: "The sweet and sour fish I made is especially delicious. I'll make it for you next time!"

   His Royal Highness: Isn't it just cooking, I can too!

   Yan Nuo looked at the princess who was full of affection for him, "I'm even more ugly."

   and the pro-princess:  …

   Xiao Chenyi: ? ? ?

   ps: The third rebirth of this article, the heroine, the heroine, and the second girl have memories of past lives

   (end of this chapter)