How do you feel about mortal literature now? Is it indifferent, interested or disgusted?

After so many years, I feel that Mortal Stream is too cold. I don't know if I should continue to write Mortal Stream.

If it is mortal, do you like the part of the mortal world before the protagonist becomes immortal?

If accepted, how long would it be? Within ten chapters? Or twenty chapters? Chapter Thirty?