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... this chapter, only grammar with minimal changes to the initial structure of the chapter, let's see if that helped!

After that, I was thinking if I should redo the chapter, but asking chat GPT to make bigger changes in the structure of the chapter to try and improve it.

What do you all think? Would you read the same chapter twice to give me feedback?

In case you guys are interested, I'll leave the base altered version in Volume 0 after this chapter is posted.

That ...

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Disclaimer: I do not own the rights to Genshin Impact nor its characters. My only character is the main OC Yomite Hissha.

Covers are also used randomly either from other artists or drawn by myself. So the credit goes to them.

My discord server: https://discord.gg/qpDTvSj3TC

Please support my Patreon for more releases and faster upload. If it goes well I am thinking of quitting my job and focus fully on writing. That would be nice as my job is really annoying.

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This story is my first wish fulfillment. It will be a little different from Genshin Impact's story, since the game is updated so often and things are added or changed. Currently it's patch 2.3 and I have been playing the game since it came out. So I am following the story closely, but...

It will not always be the same story. I'll do my best to get as close to the original as possible with my writing skills.

I will primarily focus on adding new things as well.

The romance will be slow, but we will get there.

Smut is out around chapters 120, mostly to develop romance before going into it.

Harem will be expanding, but at a decent rate...

I want to develop the characters first before I undergo another harem expansion.

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